ext_1202 ([identity profile] raveninthewind.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] alyse 2008-12-15 04:40 am (UTC)

I liked your story a lot--Logan's POV was consistent yet the reader could follow his thoughts about Alec and Max over the course of the story. Effective hurt/comfort (and I say that as someone who's only a casual fan of the genre).

The plotty parts all seemed verr canonlike.
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