So I just meandered over here via the LotS tag on Kink Bingo, and it wasn't until I read the whole thing and got all the way to the comments that I was like OH, ALYSE! O.O
Anywho, I really like what you did here. You described something very hard to capture in a lovely and eloquent way. And you took me by surprise (a good surprise!) with bottom!Richard. I totally agree with you regarding his sub potential.
This, in particular hit me right in the gut: Her own hand is swollen, stinging, and she presses it against the curve of her belly imagining, for a split second, that it's his touch. The ache between them is just so palpable. Very nice!
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Anywho, I really like what you did here. You described something very hard to capture in a lovely and eloquent way. And you took me by surprise (a good surprise!) with bottom!Richard. I totally agree with you regarding his sub potential.
This, in particular hit me right in the gut: Her own hand is swollen, stinging, and she presses it against the curve of her belly imagining, for a split second, that it's his touch. The ache between them is just so palpable. Very nice!