The story with Warrick/Greg is Romanology and... it's not good. I mean, it's not horrific, in that the writing isn't bad, but who the hell cut Nick's dick off, when did Gil metamorphise into someone who owns a slave, and takes said virgin slave anally on the first night of ownership, and why the hell are Warrick and Greg trying to get knocked up? I mean, logically, even in the universe she's invented (which is supposed to be modern day, but if the fall of the Roman Empire hadn't happened), why are they going for mpreg rather than surrogacy?
Mind, I don't like mpreg anyway, so maybe I'm biased.
Hmmmm... even without the mpreg, there's the little matter of Nick's missing dick.
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Date: 2004-08-16 12:38 pm (UTC)The story with Warrick/Greg is Romanology and... it's not good. I mean, it's not horrific, in that the writing isn't bad, but who the hell cut Nick's dick off, when did Gil metamorphise into someone who owns a slave, and takes said virgin slave anally on the first night of ownership, and why the hell are Warrick and Greg trying to get knocked up? I mean, logically, even in the universe she's invented (which is supposed to be modern day, but if the fall of the Roman Empire hadn't happened), why are they going for mpreg rather than surrogacy?
Mind, I don't like mpreg anyway, so maybe I'm biased.
Hmmmm... even without the mpreg, there's the little matter of Nick's missing dick.