Fic: Parity (CSI, Warrick gen).

Personally, I'm blaming this on misssimm or angellemyst. Whichever one of them came up with the csi100 Alias show titles challenge. There I was, merrily trying to write a 100 word drabble from Warrick when I discovered that the Warrick muse I'd acquired had Season 1's verbosity.

He. Would. Not. Shut. Up.

So now I have this 1000+ word ficlet instead. I don't think he's got anything more to say - and I'm currently strenuously resisting the Sara-muse who has taken up residence in my brain and is demanding equal air time, even if she's trying to say that a threesome fic (in POV rather than anything else) would be good. She even came up with a title, damn her, but so far Nick, thankfully, is being unusually quiet about this one.

So, I have Warrick having said his piece, and I'm not sure I'm happy with it so I'm doing that 'posting to draw a line under it and look at it objectively' thing that my brain actually seems to need me to do before it gains sufficient distance because staring at it for nigh on a fortnight isn't achieving anything, and it's only two damned pages, and besides, I'm currently trying to get Catherine and Nick into bed (well, the couch anyway) and I need Warrick (and Sara) to shut up for a bit.

I also need more punctuation in that last sentence.

( Parity )

Hmmmm... If anyone can help me put a finger on why I've just got this vague feeling of disatisfaction with it, I'd be grateful to hear what you've got to say. Maybe it's because it reads more like meta than fic? Damned if I know.

I'd also like Sara to shut up, please. Anyone want a high-strung and snippy muse on long term loan?