That was so fucking good! No kidding. It's reduced me to the f-word, and that rarely, if ever, happens! I loved the use of the present tense, somehow it flows so very well. The tension is there, the grace and gracelessness (does that make sense?). It's like a dance between Alec and Logan and they never meet eye-to-eye and they struggle. And what a beautiful struggle you've painted.
I think I should have read your fics before I wrote your prompt, because now, i feel like the Logan-Alec dynamic is sorely lacking. I've never written Logan before, so it was hard...
But your fic, all in Logan's POV was just effortless. Beautiful.
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Date: 2007-02-02 08:48 pm (UTC)I think I should have read your fics before I wrote your prompt, because now, i feel like the Logan-Alec dynamic is sorely lacking. I've never written Logan before, so it was hard...
But your fic, all in Logan's POV was just effortless. Beautiful.
Going into my memories!