Beautifully written, as always, and I love the progression through the days.
I also particularly liked the look at Nick and Helen's relationship at the beginning.
One tiny nit-pick: there's no formal tenure system in the British universities and the word isn't really used, certainly not with the American meaning. It's something that people often get wrong in Primeval fics - guess like anything when people are getting your own profession wrong, it matters to me but is probably entirely irrlevant to most readers.
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Date: 2009-03-31 08:19 pm (UTC)I also particularly liked the look at Nick and Helen's relationship at the beginning.
One tiny nit-pick: there's no formal tenure system in the British universities and the word isn't really used, certainly not with the American meaning. It's something that people often get wrong in Primeval fics - guess like anything when people are getting your own profession wrong, it matters to me but is probably entirely irrlevant to most readers.