Can't sleep...

[alyse]

... so it's Drabble time.

Drabble 1: New Pros

His heart pounded in his chest as his fingers scrabbled frantically for a hold. Sharp rocks tore into his flesh, leaving his hands slick with blood as he slithered further down. Boot clad feet kicked and flailed for a foothold, to stop his slow, inexorable descent.

A flurry of small rocks cascaded into his face. He closed his eyes, shielding his face as he slid a few more inches, his harsh breathing echoing in his ears.

Another flurry, another scrabbling sound. A hand reached for him, snagging desperately at the edge of his sleeve.

"Hold on, Sam. Don't let go."

Drabble 2: New Pros, slash, NC17

His heart pounded in his chest as his fingers scrabbled desperately for a hold. Slick skin slid beneath his fingertips. His eyes closed, unable to hold the fiery eyes that met his, knowing he'd lose it if he did.

He arched his head back, raising his arms above his head to brace himself against the hard, rhythmic thrusts rocking his body. Raising his legs, he wrapped them tightly around the trim waist as a calloused hand caught his cock and each thrust hit that sweet spot inside.

"Let go, Sam."

He opened his eyes again, held that gaze and came.



I quite like the juxtaposition between the two, the start and the end of them in synch. Worked out they way I intended to :) And I've got an idea for something along similar lines (comparing sex and danger) for J/D in SG too. This makes me happy. I'm easily amused ::g::

Comments

[luigifish.livejournal.com]

Note to self - don't read livejournal at work. It starts the bunnies hopping.

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[alyse]

Bwahahahahaha! And the spreading of evil mutant plot bunnies proceeds apace. This also makes me happy :)

[janpot.livejournal.com]

Very nice, liked the comparison.

Oh yes, hello too hope that you had a nice holiday. *g

[alyse]

Yay! You're alive! ::g::

Thanks :)

I had a wonderful holiday actually. Spent lots of time chilling with Teri and doing relaxing type things followed by the excitement of Florida and Micky Mouse. Word of advice - Universal is far far better ::g::

::hugs::

[janpot.livejournal.com]

Alive, just!! Ten hours in a car driving across France with Paul and two kids, I felt quite dead once I arrived home!

Still, now nicely resusitated with your two little drabbles. *g

Universal, hmm very nice, but Islands of Adventure was my fav and so very wet. Glad you had fun.

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[alyse]

Well, I thought both Universal Parks were far superior to Disney. For a start, considering that Disney was supposed to be kids orientated, Daniel had much more fun at Universal. There was a lot more for him to do, including a huge Kids Zone with water fountains and a Barney World. So, yes. Disney was a tad disappointing, but still fun.

And I'm not surprised by the 'dead' feeling. Driving 6 hours back from Scotland with one child was bad enough ::g::

[janpot.livejournal.com]

Oh god, don't take me back to the water zone at Universal it was just so fantastic. The great big buckets on top of the store front with the bell that would ring before the bucket tipped and the whole lot fell over the kids (mine included) underneath.

Fantastic. And do you know what, we nearly missed that bit. *shakes head* Utterly perfect for knackered parents to sit back and chill whilst their kids did their stuff.

*wails* I want to go back...